tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3762433524968339971.post154704319384443827..comments2023-09-29T08:17:08.132-07:00Comments on 3 Moms In 1 (archive): Fallen starAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14005671088564014638noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3762433524968339971.post-73134856715220565652011-04-14T19:26:51.662-07:002011-04-14T19:26:51.662-07:00Well done Julie! Wow!Well done Julie! Wow!Elissanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3762433524968339971.post-87776875311340413082011-04-14T20:26:33.604-07:002011-04-14T20:26:33.604-07:00Wow, can you imagine? Well, obviously you can - h...Wow, can you imagine? Well, obviously you can - ha ha! I just mean for things to get so bad that she had to pretend she was DEAD. Crazy. <br><br>You did a great job with this. I can picture that "greasy window" in the restaurant and now I want pizza!Elaine A.http://www.blogger.com/profile/01044279582701415786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3762433524968339971.post-52234346001950972842011-04-14T22:53:59.708-07:002011-04-14T22:53:59.708-07:00beautifully done. :) this one made me smile. tha...beautifully done. :) this one made me smile. thank you!Jennahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06666555088992266185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3762433524968339971.post-67310297212002773852011-04-15T02:59:46.248-07:002011-04-15T02:59:46.248-07:00I LOVED this! For some reason I kept picturing Lin...I LOVED this! For some reason I kept picturing Lindsay Lohan! Ha! I really like how you showed a true friendship between your characters.Kellyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18014210424987382382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3762433524968339971.post-74366106256561547102011-04-15T11:47:12.201-07:002011-04-15T11:47:12.201-07:00I really liked this story of friendship. I thought...I really liked this story of friendship. <br><br>I thought you did a great job of creating the stress of being famous and how it could lead to someone wanting to disappear. <br><br>I cried a bit at this paragraph, "I made the first move. I stretched across the table and gently retrieved her hand from her lap. I held it in mine. Eventually, she broke her stare out the window and looked at me." I think this is beautifully written.Sarahttp://www.sarahealy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3762433524968339971.post-70471040265808315612011-04-15T12:11:23.951-07:002011-04-15T12:11:23.951-07:00Fun take. I'm reading this post wondering why ...Fun take. I'm reading this post wondering why people faking their deaths would send notice on a postcard of all things. But that's neither here nor there. Good job.Erica Mhttp://freefringes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3762433524968339971.post-51061327469883065562011-04-15T12:12:59.613-07:002011-04-15T12:12:59.613-07:00This was a great story!This was a great story!jacquihttp://chicktuition.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3762433524968339971.post-75479049297504346522011-04-15T14:42:39.772-07:002011-04-15T14:42:39.772-07:00This was great! It was really believable to me, an...This was great! It was really believable to me, and a side of celebrity that I don't think many people think about. You did a great job showing their relationship and how it changed over the years. Really fun story!Jessica Annehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11331090466541120750noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3762433524968339971.post-43612846737923064532011-04-15T20:10:59.212-07:002011-04-15T20:10:59.212-07:00You played both prompts perfectly! This flowed so ...You played both prompts perfectly! This flowed so smoothly and was completely believable.I love the glimpse into a celebrities "real" life.<br>This was a lovely line:<br>"I prayed for the anger and pain to release through the tears that rolled down my face."<br>Stopping by from TRDC.<br>http://allbtwnthelines.wordpress.commommylebronhttp://mommylebron.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3762433524968339971.post-4149229822770455582011-04-19T11:35:50.780-07:002011-04-19T11:35:50.780-07:00I love that it's a story between friends, and ...I love that it's a story between friends, and this "I was afraid when she faltered. I was shattered when she crashed."<br><br>Shows exactly how close they were/are.<br><br>Wonder how many real-life actors consider the same fate?Ashhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16041241998702255016noreply@blogger.com